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South Korea and North Korea have been divided since 1953. It is a sad story but it is a situation we are in. To be united there are things to do first such as economic unity. I basically agree with this article because I think it is good for unity of our nations to make economic unity first.

It is a really good thought for us to make a economic unity. Especially making a path to Mt. Baekdu is a good choice for South Korea because we can see them and tour. I wondered how Mt. Baekdu look like because it is the highest mountain in our country. Even though it’ in our country, it is sad that we cannot tour them or watch them.

There are many people, business men who is preparing for this. Even though they are doing this to make money for their selves, they have extra purpose of making our nations come together. Many CEOs and business men are looking forward to this project. I think it is a good way for us to know more about them.

If our economy unites with North Korea, there are no differences between unification. It is because we can help each other and go there whenever we want to, and then it’s like a one country.

There are many people who disagree with this as well as people who agree. I am one of the people who agree. I wish that our country grow well in economy as a one country.